Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Goodbye Victoria

There they stood in that crowded cafe, surrounded by so many yet they were alone. Their breathing slowly coming to perfect harmony with every second they stared in to each others eyes. So many thought passed though Lucians mind as his face got closer to Victoria's. Oh how he longed to tell her how he trully felt. But as he neared the lips he so longed to explore, he halted and matched his forehead with her's. He faintly smiled at her, whispered "im sorry" softly into her left ear. Baffled by his words and with tears running down her rosy pink cheeks, she could only see him walk away gradually fading into the ocean of people.

~Lucian Volkov

1 comment:

  1. Good writing! Your choice of words allows for a lot of visual imagery.

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